A highly promising piece
There are some issues with anatomy, yes.
Such as, she does look quite a bit too thin for the size of her breasts. If she were to be just a bit wider, and actually seem to have some stomach fat to her, the breasts would be fine. But for how skeletal her abdomen is, her breasts are abnormally large.
Also, her hand on the sword looks too tiny compared to her other hand.
Her foot is also little too small. It should only be about an inch and a half shorter then one's lower arm.
The shading does seem a bit off, but I don't know how to correct that myself, so I won't go into detail about it.
Another thing I find off, the smoke looks too thick and solid for a gas.
I'd say something about the eyes, but they've been pointed out already.
Besides those issues, I do quite like this piece ^^ The general coloring and design is very nicely done~
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