Bahaha XD

I still find this freakin funny XD

Good animation..

Not the best jokes in my opinion. Though, to you they may be funny. Everyone's sense of humor is different ^^

I really did like the animation though, it was very smooth. And the voice acting wasn't static-y and grating on the ears either, so that was another bonus as well.

All and all, you get a decent score from me for animation and over all voice acting;

6/10
2/5

Keep up the good work ;)

"Hey tonberry, why's your eye all twitchy?"

XD Epic win! Keep up the great work ^^

Beautiful

This is truly a beautiful piece of music. Keep up the fantastic work~

A highly promising piece

There are some issues with anatomy, yes.

Such as, she does look quite a bit too thin for the size of her breasts. If she were to be just a bit wider, and actually seem to have some stomach fat to her, the breasts would be fine. But for how skeletal her abdomen is, her breasts are abnormally large.

Also, her hand on the sword looks too tiny compared to her other hand.

Her foot is also little too small. It should only be about an inch and a half shorter then one's lower arm.

The shading does seem a bit off, but I don't know how to correct that myself, so I won't go into detail about it.

Another thing I find off, the smoke looks too thick and solid for a gas.

I'd say something about the eyes, but they've been pointed out already.

Besides those issues, I do quite like this piece ^^ The general coloring and design is very nicely done~